This is a zero budget short. It was contributed to by people working out of the goodness of their hearts. The short was made for this Virgin Competition and shot just a week or so before the deadline.
Dark, witty, good location, nice casting and acting - a very high standard, putting a lot of pressure on some films that have dominated the charts for a good month now.
June 30, 2008
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benloydhomes
Nicely shot guys.
June 30, 2008
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blimeyosilage
I really like this - good effort!
June 30, 2008
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Orion
Funny and sad. A Poignant and memorable effort.
July 1, 2008
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criticalmind
Got to make the shortlist! Quality!
July 1, 2008
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Steve
good casting, abit witty ,fantastic location overhaul was very enjoyable to watch if not a bit sad.
maybe do another one with a different outcome.
July 1, 2008
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filmboffin
The drama, so well done!
July 1, 2008
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riccardo
i found the script well written, the actors were well casted, the man looked the part of someone at this witts end and ready to jump.
the lady seemed, well exactly that a refined someone whom one would never cut in front of. a beauty that would captivate your thoughts and i feel the ending did exactly that, made you think of where she went, did she jump, did she not, was she ever even there to begin with.
musical accompaniment was perfectly matched to the emotive levels of the film and although slightly short, a dramatic success
July 1, 2008
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jags
extremely dramatic and gave a sense of uneasiness,very surreal! 4.5 stars!
July 2, 2008
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ateday
very good,well acted ,well paced roped me in i thought they where going to walk off into the sunset together don't i feel silly love that lady's voice by the way.good luck.
July 3, 2008
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brokebackbunny
superb
July 3, 2008
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salvara
romantic comedy ending with tragedy all in the space of a minute. Who'd have though it would work! Well done!
I have to say that - even though we have an entry in the competition also - it would be criminal if this piece wasn't recognised. Well written, well observed, and subtly handled. It's not perfect but it is a stunning bit of storytelling, effortlessly delivered.
I am seriously impressed.
July 3, 2008
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TheAngel
i love it, its really awesome lots of emotion gained!
July 3, 2008
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babybear
Breathtaking.
July 3, 2008
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Lane
just like a proper film. ace
July 3, 2008
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woomarun
Jeez
July 4, 2008
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Nancy
Very v. good.
July 4, 2008
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nanananananana
Horrible. Brilliant but horrible
July 4, 2008
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chumbawumbawumba
like a proper film
July 4, 2008
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caro
Beautiful. Music fits perfectly with the scene. Love it.
July 4, 2008
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Katethecat
how hot is the guy ! And what a great actor!
They both give a very genuine performance. Love it.
Haunting. I would love to see more of them together... or failing that...more of him with me !
where can i find him ?????
July 4, 2008
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whitebear2008
Best so far, brillant, Excellent... do more..
July 4, 2008
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Jon
Breathtaking performance by the girl with the curly hair. Well shot, loved it.
July 4, 2008
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scholar
This is a wonderful piece of work. it is well written and emotionally engaging. The direction is solid and confident, the acting has credibility and the cinamatography is thoughtful. A dramatically accomplished short from a group who understand storytelling.
I have noticed that the ratings here are all for the busy, loud hack and slash movies or for the "funnies", so I don't expect the masses to go for this. I however would say that, with one other exception and for a different reason, this is the standout movie of those I have seen so far.
Very well done indeed.
July 5, 2008
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Seema
beautiful and very sad
July 5, 2008
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Jimmy Evans
good
July 6, 2008
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Jordi Jomez
bello
July 6, 2008
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zambeezee joe
man that ending is a killer
July 6, 2008
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deftech
flippin heck
July 6, 2008
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soooooo good
July 6, 2008
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bleddyn
waaaw!!! realy moving! I love it! especially the girl...
July 6, 2008
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charlottes
Lovely and beautifully shot and cast. Felt sound could have been slightly better - music much louder than the dialogue. But perfectly matched score.
Dark and brooding, witty and thoughtful - an excellent job
July 6, 2008
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marvinthemartian
brillint. best so far
July 7, 2008
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garbagedump
God almighty!
July 7, 2008
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mattpayne
really nicely acted. beautifully shot in a good location. good soundtrack and really good idea. nice one
July 7, 2008
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Victor5
not for me thanks
July 7, 2008
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premila
Really impressive, background very well captured and
story line well presented. nice one
July 7, 2008
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Sanford
Excellent short! Great idea, well shot. But it could have gone in so many ways other than that abrupt ending. Just my opinion, doesn't change the fact this this (and one other film) are truly outstanding.
Haha Ben, I almost didnt recognise you acting all serious. Where are the flying kicks, roundhouse and uppercut. Jokes aside this is a great lil short well acted and shot. Great sound design and composing to boot. Great job guys.
Check mine out. 'Behind closed dhur'.
Azi Rahman
July 7, 2008
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buster
TOTALLY RUBBISH REALLY BORING DON'T WANT TO SEE AGAIN
July 7, 2008
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pathetic !!!!!'
July 7, 2008
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I liked the constant glances towards the ground below.
July 7, 2008
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benjetmen
it had a meaning but i'm not to sure if they got it out right. for a no buget it was good but it could be better. but well done guys
July 7, 2008
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Troy gardener
Some typical critical comments on here, from some idiots, good film, I enjoyed it.
July 8, 2008
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Yes, I like this very much. Maybe some of the comments above about it being THE standout movie are a bit too generous, but I'd agree that it's ONE OF the standout movies, particularly in terms of drama and acting. (Well done to the actors - I'd've felt nervous standing so close to the edge!!)
beautifully shot, funny, held my attention, really liked the ending, could be interpreted many ways.
Loved it.
July 8, 2008
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Pitter
Dull and boring
July 8, 2008
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That made me feel sick, but in a good way, love the ending *****
July 8, 2008
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Mister Tumnus
So good. *****
July 8, 2008
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Andrea Thompson
Very sad and very beautiful. I hope you do well.
July 9, 2008
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Chris
A wonderful little short. Poetic scenery, solid acting and a touching score. Sound mixing was perhaps a little off, and personally I would have enjoyed more conversation between the two... but then again, the abrupt sweetness of it makes it so engaging. Well done, probably the best short (pound for pound) I've seen on here so far.
Very good short. May I say that I think the lady is real and genuinely jumps - that's why the film is poignant and sad ... (wipes tear away)
July 9, 2008
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eeebygoom
cracking
July 9, 2008
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poe
Great.
July 9, 2008
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It amazed me how involved I could become with two characters within a few seconds. Beautiful film,credible characters and wonderfully ambiguous ending. After You is excellent.
July 10, 2008
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panzermonster
Class of the field
July 10, 2008
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Will
Wow, brilliant storytelling, not a line wasted - excellent.
cheers for the comment about butterface. i really liked your film its short and sweet, the cinematography is class, very good location and nice story. acting also is very good. good luck with the competation and making more films
July 12, 2008
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rohith
hey very impressive work...
everything taken care of so well...the location, editing, music, acting, appropriate clothing,
good work
would like to meet up with the team...
i make films too..check out "two minutes in an elevator"
email me drrohithg@yahoo.com
p.s. this is not a zero budget film...i see 100% effort in this
July 12, 2008
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georgia
Beautiful beautiful shots. Love how well judged this is. Wow. so understated and so powerful.
Woah. Great film. Really sad. Check out our entry, "Mr. Alice", and let us know what you think!
July 14, 2008
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ginac
Powerful, witty, tragic – Well done
July 14, 2008
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Lisacarver
Fantastic acting from Ben. Think it should be made into a full length piece.
July 14, 2008
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I love this; conceptually superb, visually slick and darkly humorous
July 15, 2008
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BigPhil
Great effort
July 15, 2008
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DGFGF
Mediocre.
July 16, 2008
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Mossy
Well done!
July 21, 2008
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Stunning. It's close to perfect. Shots, performances, timing. The ending is a heartbreaking. If I could change anything I'd make the end credits more simple so that they'd fit with the mood of the film. That's a minor point however. This is inspired.
July 22, 2008
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K
Yes the end credits jar a little bit. They seem incongruous. Very watchable piece though. It lacks a sligh punch at the end. It's amost too abrupt.An extra few seconds of the camera on him speaking before she disappears maybe?
the cinematography is beautiful and for it's length, very effective on the whole
July 23, 2008
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timscarfe
Amazing little piece - great acting from Ben Holmes. I would love to see what the male decided to do after this event. Perhaps a follow-on!
July 23, 2008
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Lexy
Really great short film....really draws you in....I want to know what happens next!
July 23, 2008
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YCymro
This short is superb, the location is fantastic, the mixture of Diagetic and Non-diagetic sounds mix brilliantly. The acting is perfectly timed and the quality of short script captures the moment beautifully! Da Iawn / Well Done
July 24, 2008
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Mylovelyhorse
Liked it. Good luck for the shortlist. Surely a contender.
July 25, 2008
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dirctirofspecialdelivery
I know i'm the competition... But i liked it dude. Nice ending. Well done.
July 27, 2008
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Ed
I am happy to have watched this, even if it is against a friends film, but was very good indeed. Well done. Would happily produce something longer you have written. Hope to see you in the final 12!
July 28, 2008
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filmbuff
Some amazing shots. Loved the women,very intense am I the only one who found the guy weak?It seemed like he was searching for his lines!
July 29, 2008
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I think this was a great peice. Love the tenderness depth of the actors and i think it was well shot.
I dont think 'filmbuff' above knows what he is talking about, i think the man was deep in thought about the predicament he was in. Clearly not a 'filmbuff' to make such an amateur comment.
'Ed' Says he liked it even though its agains ta friends... I hope Ed knows its ok to like more than one film! But his comments show whata great job you guys did.
All round i liked it. Just a shame it was only two mins, would love to see more of them. Good luck with the comp.. i do hope you make final 12 if not win it out right !
c
July 31, 2008
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Jskeed
From the director of this film:
Just 2 things...
Firstly, thank you to all of the people who have commented on this film. Some of you have been very kind and those who haven’t thanks for saying something - the negative ones made me smile.
Secondly I’d like to say how sad it is that some of the films I really loved watching on this site haven’t been short listed. In particular ‘La Lettre’ and ‘Harvester’ which were both fantastic in different ways. Well done guys I recognise your talent if it means anything.
If anyone wants to get in touch with the cast or crew for this film you can email me and I’ll put you through to them adam@cr38media.com
Thanks again Ad
July 31, 2008
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Jskeed
From the director of this film:
Just 2 things...
Firstly, thank you to all of the people who have commented on this film. Some of you have been very kind and those who haven’t thanks for saying something - the negative ones made me smile.
Secondly I’d like to say how sad it is that some of the films I really loved watching on this site haven’t been short listed. In particular ‘La Lettre’ and ‘Harvester’ which were both fantastic in different ways. Well done guys I recognise your talent if it means anything.
If anyone wants to get in touch with the cast or crew for this film you can email me and I’ll put you through to them adam@cr38media.com
I though your film was brilliany guys, I definately thought it was going to be short listed! Anyway I directed a film called 'LV 16' on here, see what you think. Good luck in the future.
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SteedsUmbrella
Wonderful photography, loved it.
June 30, 2008
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Witty and charming. Very enjoyable ;)
June 30, 2008
Report this commentmountaingoat
I really enjoyed this film. It's shot beautifully and the acting is spot on.
June 30, 2008
Report this commentLucracle
Dark, witty, good location, nice casting and acting - a very high standard, putting a lot of pressure on some films that have dominated the charts for a good month now.
June 30, 2008
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Nicely shot guys.
June 30, 2008
Report this commentblimeyosilage
I really like this - good effort!
June 30, 2008
Report this commentOrion
Funny and sad. A Poignant and memorable effort.
July 1, 2008
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Got to make the shortlist! Quality!
July 1, 2008
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good casting, abit witty ,fantastic location overhaul was very enjoyable to watch if not a bit sad.
maybe do another one with a different outcome.
July 1, 2008
Report this commentfilmboffin
The drama, so well done!
July 1, 2008
Report this commentriccardo
i found the script well written, the actors were well casted, the man looked the part of someone at this witts end and ready to jump.
the lady seemed, well exactly that a refined someone whom one would never cut in front of. a beauty that would captivate your thoughts and i feel the ending did exactly that, made you think of where she went, did she jump, did she not, was she ever even there to begin with.
musical accompaniment was perfectly matched to the emotive levels of the film and although slightly short, a dramatic success
July 1, 2008
Report this commentjags
extremely dramatic and gave a sense of uneasiness,very surreal! 4.5 stars!
July 2, 2008
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very good,well acted ,well paced roped me in i thought they where going to walk off into the sunset together don't i feel silly love that lady's voice by the way.good luck.
July 3, 2008
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superb
July 3, 2008
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romantic comedy ending with tragedy all in the space of a minute. Who'd have though it would work! Well done!
July 3, 2008
Report this commentWhiteChocolateFrog
I have to say that - even though we have an entry in the competition also - it would be criminal if this piece wasn't recognised. Well written, well observed, and subtly handled. It's not perfect but it is a stunning bit of storytelling, effortlessly delivered.
I am seriously impressed.
July 3, 2008
Report this commentTheAngel
i love it, its really awesome lots of emotion gained!
July 3, 2008
Report this commentbabybear
Breathtaking.
July 3, 2008
Report this commentLane
just like a proper film. ace
July 3, 2008
Report this commentwoomarun
Jeez
July 4, 2008
Report this commentNancy
Very v. good.
July 4, 2008
Report this commentnanananananana
Horrible. Brilliant but horrible
July 4, 2008
Report this commentchumbawumbawumba
like a proper film
July 4, 2008
Report this commentcaro
Beautiful. Music fits perfectly with the scene. Love it.
July 4, 2008
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how hot is the guy ! And what a great actor!
They both give a very genuine performance. Love it.
Haunting. I would love to see more of them together... or failing that...more of him with me !
where can i find him ?????
July 4, 2008
Report this commentwhitebear2008
Best so far, brillant, Excellent... do more..
July 4, 2008
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Breathtaking performance by the girl with the curly hair. Well shot, loved it.
July 4, 2008
Report this commentscholar
This is a wonderful piece of work. it is well written and emotionally engaging. The direction is solid and confident, the acting has credibility and the cinamatography is thoughtful. A dramatically accomplished short from a group who understand storytelling.
I have noticed that the ratings here are all for the busy, loud hack and slash movies or for the "funnies", so I don't expect the masses to go for this. I however would say that, with one other exception and for a different reason, this is the standout movie of those I have seen so far.
Very well done indeed.
July 5, 2008
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beautiful and very sad
July 5, 2008
Report this commentJimmy Evans
good
July 6, 2008
Report this commentJordi Jomez
bello
July 6, 2008
Report this commentzambeezee joe
man that ending is a killer
July 6, 2008
Report this commentdeftech
flippin heck
July 6, 2008
Report this commentsoooooo good
July 6, 2008
Report this commentbleddyn
waaaw!!! realy moving! I love it! especially the girl...
July 6, 2008
Report this commentcharlottes
Lovely and beautifully shot and cast. Felt sound could have been slightly better - music much louder than the dialogue. But perfectly matched score.
Dark and brooding, witty and thoughtful - an excellent job
July 6, 2008
Report this commentmarvinthemartian
brillint. best so far
July 7, 2008
Report this commentgarbagedump
God almighty!
July 7, 2008
Report this commentmattpayne
really nicely acted. beautifully shot in a good location. good soundtrack and really good idea. nice one
July 7, 2008
Report this commentVictor5
not for me thanks
July 7, 2008
Report this commentpremila
Really impressive, background very well captured and
story line well presented. nice one
July 7, 2008
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Excellent short! Great idea, well shot. But it could have gone in so many ways other than that abrupt ending. Just my opinion, doesn't change the fact this this (and one other film) are truly outstanding.
July 7, 2008
Report this commentaustinb
Amazing. Really really good.
July 7, 2008
Report this commentmyshoesdon'tfit
killer ending. thought theyd go off together
July 7, 2008
Report this commentAzirahman
Haha Ben, I almost didnt recognise you acting all serious. Where are the flying kicks, roundhouse and uppercut. Jokes aside this is a great lil short well acted and shot. Great sound design and composing to boot. Great job guys.
Check mine out. 'Behind closed dhur'.
Azi Rahman
July 7, 2008
Report this commentbuster
TOTALLY RUBBISH REALLY BORING DON'T WANT TO SEE AGAIN
July 7, 2008
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July 7, 2008
Report this commentI liked the constant glances towards the ground below.
July 7, 2008
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it had a meaning but i'm not to sure if they got it out right. for a no buget it was good but it could be better. but well done guys
July 7, 2008
Report this commentTroy gardener
Some typical critical comments on here, from some idiots, good film, I enjoyed it.
July 8, 2008
Report this commentYes, I like this very much. Maybe some of the comments above about it being THE standout movie are a bit too generous, but I'd agree that it's ONE OF the standout movies, particularly in terms of drama and acting. (Well done to the actors - I'd've felt nervous standing so close to the edge!!)
July 8, 2008
Report this commentAndonisT
I want the shot 20 seconds in framed on my wall.
July 8, 2008
Report this commentbeautifully shot, funny, held my attention, really liked the ending, could be interpreted many ways.
Loved it.
July 8, 2008
Report this commentPitter
Dull and boring
July 8, 2008
Report this commentThat made me feel sick, but in a good way, love the ending *****
July 8, 2008
Report this commentMister Tumnus
So good. *****
July 8, 2008
Report this commentAndrea Thompson
Very sad and very beautiful. I hope you do well.
July 9, 2008
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A wonderful little short. Poetic scenery, solid acting and a touching score. Sound mixing was perhaps a little off, and personally I would have enjoyed more conversation between the two... but then again, the abrupt sweetness of it makes it so engaging. Well done, probably the best short (pound for pound) I've seen on here so far.
July 9, 2008
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Very good short. May I say that I think the lady is real and genuinely jumps - that's why the film is poignant and sad ... (wipes tear away)
July 9, 2008
Report this commenteeebygoom
cracking
July 9, 2008
Report this commentpoe
Great.
July 9, 2008
Report this commentIt amazed me how involved I could become with two characters within a few seconds. Beautiful film,credible characters and wonderfully ambiguous ending. After You is excellent.
July 10, 2008
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Class of the field
July 10, 2008
Report this commentWill
Wow, brilliant storytelling, not a line wasted - excellent.
July 10, 2008
Report this commentfiends
Beautiful film.
July 11, 2008
Report this commentdaydreamz
cheers for the comment about butterface. i really liked your film its short and sweet, the cinematography is class, very good location and nice story. acting also is very good. good luck with the competation and making more films
July 12, 2008
Report this commentrohith
hey very impressive work...
everything taken care of so well...the location, editing, music, acting, appropriate clothing,
good work
would like to meet up with the team...
i make films too..check out "two minutes in an elevator"
email me drrohithg@yahoo.com
p.s. this is not a zero budget film...i see 100% effort in this
July 12, 2008
Report this commentgeorgia
Beautiful beautiful shots. Love how well judged this is. Wow. so understated and so powerful.
July 12, 2008
Report this commentJen Loris
Beautifully done.
July 13, 2008
Report this commentmanalivestudios
Woah. Great film. Really sad. Check out our entry, "Mr. Alice", and let us know what you think!
July 14, 2008
Report this commentginac
Powerful, witty, tragic – Well done
July 14, 2008
Report this commentLisacarver
Fantastic acting from Ben. Think it should be made into a full length piece.
July 14, 2008
Report this commentI love this; conceptually superb, visually slick and darkly humorous
July 15, 2008
Report this commentBigPhil
Great effort
July 15, 2008
Report this commentDGFGF
Mediocre.
July 16, 2008
Report this commentMossy
Well done!
July 21, 2008
Report this commentStunning. It's close to perfect. Shots, performances, timing. The ending is a heartbreaking. If I could change anything I'd make the end credits more simple so that they'd fit with the mood of the film. That's a minor point however. This is inspired.
July 22, 2008
Report this commentK
Yes the end credits jar a little bit. They seem incongruous. Very watchable piece though. It lacks a sligh punch at the end. It's amost too abrupt.An extra few seconds of the camera on him speaking before she disappears maybe?
the cinematography is beautiful and for it's length, very effective on the whole
July 23, 2008
Report this commenttimscarfe
Amazing little piece - great acting from Ben Holmes. I would love to see what the male decided to do after this event. Perhaps a follow-on!
July 23, 2008
Report this commentLexy
Really great short film....really draws you in....I want to know what happens next!
July 23, 2008
Report this commentYCymro
This short is superb, the location is fantastic, the mixture of Diagetic and Non-diagetic sounds mix brilliantly. The acting is perfectly timed and the quality of short script captures the moment beautifully! Da Iawn / Well Done
July 24, 2008
Report this commentMylovelyhorse
Liked it. Good luck for the shortlist. Surely a contender.
July 25, 2008
Report this commentdirctirofspecialdelivery
I know i'm the competition... But i liked it dude. Nice ending. Well done.
July 27, 2008
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I am happy to have watched this, even if it is against a friends film, but was very good indeed. Well done. Would happily produce something longer you have written. Hope to see you in the final 12!
July 28, 2008
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Some amazing shots. Loved the women,very intense am I the only one who found the guy weak?It seemed like he was searching for his lines!
July 29, 2008
Report this commentI think this was a great peice. Love the tenderness depth of the actors and i think it was well shot.
I dont think 'filmbuff' above knows what he is talking about, i think the man was deep in thought about the predicament he was in. Clearly not a 'filmbuff' to make such an amateur comment.
'Ed' Says he liked it even though its agains ta friends... I hope Ed knows its ok to like more than one film! But his comments show whata great job you guys did.
All round i liked it. Just a shame it was only two mins, would love to see more of them. Good luck with the comp.. i do hope you make final 12 if not win it out right !
c
July 31, 2008
Report this commentJskeed
From the director of this film:
Just 2 things...
Firstly, thank you to all of the people who have commented on this film. Some of you have been very kind and those who haven’t thanks for saying something - the negative ones made me smile.
Secondly I’d like to say how sad it is that some of the films I really loved watching on this site haven’t been short listed. In particular ‘La Lettre’ and ‘Harvester’ which were both fantastic in different ways. Well done guys I recognise your talent if it means anything.
If anyone wants to get in touch with the cast or crew for this film you can email me and I’ll put you through to them adam@cr38media.com
Thanks again Ad
July 31, 2008
Report this commentJskeed
From the director of this film:
Just 2 things...
Firstly, thank you to all of the people who have commented on this film. Some of you have been very kind and those who haven’t thanks for saying something - the negative ones made me smile.
Secondly I’d like to say how sad it is that some of the films I really loved watching on this site haven’t been short listed. In particular ‘La Lettre’ and ‘Harvester’ which were both fantastic in different ways. Well done guys I recognise your talent if it means anything.
If anyone wants to get in touch with the cast or crew for this film you can email me and I’ll put you through to them adam@cr38media.com
Thanks again Ad
July 31, 2008
Report this commentGGSGSD
Shame you guys didn't make the shortlist.
July 31, 2008
Report this commentryanhaysom
I though your film was brilliany guys, I definately thought it was going to be short listed! Anyway I directed a film called 'LV 16' on here, see what you think. Good luck in the future.
July 31, 2008
Report this commentbargainhunter
This should have gone through
July 31, 2008
Report this commentspasticdes
Very nice!
August 3, 2008
Report this commentoliverlustria
Good short n sweet film very deep
October 6, 2008
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